tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7593046826460751802.post7060301224633372196..comments2018-04-28T20:39:58.914+12:00Comments on Shivam @ Elm Park School: My birthdayClassof2019http://www.blogger.com/profile/02313464699381718303noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7593046826460751802.post-38008956156558342012015-06-11T14:03:46.456+12:002015-06-11T14:03:46.456+12:00You are finding and using different words and enjo...You are finding and using different words and enjoy adding detail to make your stories more interesting - keep up the good work!Mrs Holdomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05484848365513258500noreply@blogger.com